NHS puts on a successful winter Coffeehouse
December 24, 2014
A glow of a light calmly hits the performers’ face as they sing different melodies and tunes. The walls are lined with sparkling snowflake cutouts inside a black room with a large sign above the stage in big letters spelling out “COFFEEHOUSE ‘14” with Christmas lights around it.
Coffeehouse is a performance put on by the National Honor Society. It has musical guests and performers that audition through the school to get a spot. It was held on Dec. 12 with shows at 6-8 p.m. What makes it special is the fact all profits made during the night are donated.
This year, the money went to provide school supplies and necessities for the Beverly Girls Empowerment Academy in Kenya. The school supports about 40 young girls who are in kindergarten through third grade and are trying to create a better life for themselves. Senior Megan Wallace’s brother lived in the country for roughly six months and became close with the family who started the school.
Wallace said, “Every day when he would walk to the farm he was working with, he would always see the girls out playing and singing with each other. When he got back home, he decided to do everything he could to raise funds for such a good cause.”
Several weeks before the showing, the NHS officers held auditions, the acts were a wide variety of talent. They ranged from the Davis sisters, to science teacher Andrew Weaver and all the way to groups of friends looking to entertain.
Senior Sophia Portelli, president of NHS said, “Coffeehouse is a lot of work, I mean hours and hours and hours of work but it is all worth it in the end. I think all the officers were sad with losing so many great acts last year, but they kind of came out of the woodwork this time and created a whole show full of incredible talent.”
The performance is what everyone seems to notice, but the NHS officers are the ones putting this magical night all together. At the end of the night he NHS officers, Abby Lange, Brady Nahkala, Jayna Davis, Matthew Treacy, Jonathan Luk and Kallie Quist had a surprise performance to the song “Fergalicious”.
Senior Marla Martin said, “My favorite part was having the NHS officers put on the aftershow, it was unexpected and it was really good, I’ve been to it before but this year it was new and exciting.”
Seniors Matthew Treacy and Cora Sutherland were the emcees for the night. The witty and funny comments they came up with are what seemed to pull the entire night together. This year’s Coffeehouse was one to remember and most people are looking forward to the one presented in the spring.
Sutherland said, “I am glad people laughed here and there but my favorite part was how everyone came together to have a good time and how something so enjoyable was beneficial for the girls’ school in Africa.”
Lars • Jan 8, 2015 at 12:36 pm
Very well sructured article. Coffeehouse is a really cool concert and it’s awesome to see people participating in it.
Rhyan Biever • Jan 8, 2015 at 1:49 am
Your lead was very descriptive and provided a nice setup of the story. Your ending quote was very good, it was powerful and it hit home. The only thing i would watch out for is your wording, you occasionally put in redundant words such as, it has in it has musical guests… overall it was very impressive.
Emily Lodahl • Jan 7, 2015 at 9:46 pm
I really like your quotes because they covered what coffeehouse is really about. You captured the effect coffeehouse has on people and all of the hard work of it. Great description and I loved the intro how you said, “A glow of a light calmly hits the performers’ face as they sing different melodies and tunes.” It really sets the stage! Good job Lex!
Sam Begin • Jan 7, 2015 at 9:26 pm
Good use of descriptive language and sources to add to a story that informs people who may not even know what coffeehouse is. The lead introduces you well to the story and the ending quotes makes the story memorable. Great story!
Kjell Sandstrom • Jan 7, 2015 at 9:15 pm
I absolutely love the descriptive lead! Also really love how you added the fact about how the money went to a good cause and how much work was put into the event. Really shows the behind the scenes of the event. The performances are up on youtube, you could have linked to them!
here they are!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bd3J_r-m-YA
Kjell Sandstrom • Jan 7, 2015 at 9:15 pm
I absolutely love the descriptive lead! Also really love how you added the fact about how the money went to a good cause and how much work was put into the event. Really shows the behind the scenes of the event. The performances are up on youtube, you could have linked to them!
Oh wait, here they are!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bd3J_r-m-YA
Kaitlyn Doyle • Jan 7, 2015 at 9:10 pm
The article made the coffeehouse come to life, with all of the great descriptive quotes and details. I think my favorite part of the article was the conclusion you ended with a really strong quote.
Andy Bjerk • Jan 7, 2015 at 8:32 pm
This does a really awesome job at setting the stage for coffeehouse and the atmosphere in the blackbox theatre during the performance. I like how it doesn’t just focus on the performers but also talks about the NHS officers and their efforts.
Joe Price • Jan 7, 2015 at 7:34 pm
Great description! I really liked how you informed people more about the charity that Coffeehouse supported. Most people know about Coffeehouse, but not the charity. I love how you ended with a strong quote.
Clay Knoll • Jan 7, 2015 at 5:32 pm
I really like the article. It does a good job of visualizing what the show was like and explaining what Coffeehouse is.
Jessica Thomas • Jan 7, 2015 at 3:06 pm
I enjoyed the end quote, it pulled the whole piece together. I liked the background information that you included too. Not only did it talk about the performance but included all of the hard work that goes into the event which is an aspect that is not often taken under consideration. Way to go.
Shelby Alm • Jan 7, 2015 at 1:51 pm
My favorite part was your lead, It was really descriptive. The rest of the article showed that you had done your research because of all the facts and the smaller but extremely important details. It really gets at what coffee house is about and so it was a great article!
Matt Brown • Jan 6, 2015 at 8:44 pm
This was really a fun and interesting story because it goes further into detail as to what the NHS does behind the scenes of this performance.
Ana Reding • Jan 4, 2015 at 11:13 am
The quotes are well put together and give meaning to what the article is about
Marya Redmond • Jan 3, 2015 at 7:44 am
It was a great article and had a super descriptive lead which sucked me right into reading the article. I like how you focused a lot on the charity part of coffeehouse because that’s what is really important. Your ending quote was also very strong and provided great closure to the article.