Bullies should receive increased punishment
November 1, 2013
Today, 160,000 students miss school due to bullying. During one class period at Stillwater Area High School, seven students around the U.S. are bullied, and 85 percent of the time no one intervenes. Schools are responsible for the security of their students and can not accomplish this without increased intervention, prevention and an established punishment for bullies.
In early October, two girls in Florida, aged 12 and 14, were given felonies for bullying another 12 year old girl, Rebecca Sedwick, that eventually caused her to commit suicide by jumping off a cement factory tower. Sedwick had received harassment both online and through texts for months by a group of approximately 10 girls.
There are laws in all states against harassment, verbal and physical abuse, stalking and threats. These actions are used by various students across the nation to tear down individuals, which makes bullying a crime. However, it is constantly not punished. Bullies should be suspended or even expelled from school grounds depending on the degree of bullying. They should be directed to further counselling and therapy to prevent a reoccurrence.
Opponents of punishment for bullies are correct when they say jailtime is not the answer. Most bullies are minors and deserve a second chance, but this does not mean bullies should be let off with a simple “don’t do this again” by their parents or teacher.
In May of this year, an anti-bullying bill passed through the Minnesota house but was put on hold until next year because “supporters of the anti-bullying law just ran out of time.” This anti-bullying law required each school board to adopt a written policy prohibiting intimidation and bullying of any student. This lack of time and “importance” will result in another 3.2 million students being bullied within the following year.
In the house Representative Sondra Erickson, R-Princeton called the bill a “one-size-fits-all unfunded mandate,“ and said, “This is something we don’t need to be doing, I think things are under control.”
Is bullying really under control? Seventy seven percent of students have experienced some form of bullying whether it be mentally, physically or verbally. Why don’t we ask the 282,000 students who are physically attacked in secondary schools each month if they believe the situation is under control? Schools need to do more in order to intervene and prevent bullying.
It is easy for those who have never been bullied or have never witnessed someone around them be bullied to oppose this idea. It takes the experience to ignite the fire to fight against bullying. Bullying takes all the core values of a particular individual and tears them apart making them seem useless. Pastimes become pointless, school becomes a torture chamber and life become a rollercoaster through hell.
This state and national lack of action has led students to take matters into their own hands. School is no longer a safe place for students. 100,000 students now carry a gun to school for protection. And people still question the increase in school shootings? Harassment and bullying have been linked to 75 percent of school shootings.
All these statistics are too high for students in elementary to high school and are continuously rising. School Staff exhibit a lack of intervention and punishment. It is the responsibility of the school to provide a safe environment for students to learn, not an environment where students dread every day.
Christy Prust • Nov 27, 2013 at 6:59 pm
Jasmine did a very nice job of writing such a great story on a touchy topic. The data she included in her writing added to the topic and I agree with her opinion on the issue. Bullying seems to be one of those topics that no one wants to talk about, but it is such a major issue impacting our youth.
Megan Katula • Nov 27, 2013 at 4:28 am
The subject of the headline caught my attention. The lead/nutgraph drew me in and the rest of it was very interesting. It held my attention the whole time. I think the opinion of the article is a popular one. This is very well written.
Ryan longnecker • Nov 27, 2013 at 3:22 am
Holy cow, I can actually feel the passion in this article. This article is phenomenal because it has one thing that so many articles lack and that’s emotion and honesty. The strength of this article is crazy. Great Job Aussie! It is the best article I have read on the website.
Sydney Spreck • Nov 27, 2013 at 2:13 am
Well done on the article, it has a solid position and a lot of good supporting information to back up your opinion on the subject. You’re lead was interesting and attention catching, providing a lot of information from the get-go. Nevertheless I would suggest doing one more read over, because there are a few strangely worded sentences in the article. Otherwise it was a good and compelling piece of writing overall.
Carly Glaser • Nov 27, 2013 at 1:44 am
This article is really well written, and did a good job providing opinion and facts. It was a good idea to be written because it is a big issue that does not get brought up as much in schools, yet is continuously happening. One thing i would have liked to see is a few interviews from anonymous people who have gotten bullied, what they think about it, and what they think the bullies consequence should be.
Olivia Flicker • Nov 27, 2013 at 12:10 am
I like your opinion on this issue. The angle of your story is interesting, but effective to those who know what it’s like to be bullied. Your article is well written and it makes us think of ways to prevent such a thing from happening.
Kenzie Monson • Nov 26, 2013 at 11:36 pm
This article is very well done. The position is very clear and you give statistics that relate very well with the article. And the way that you write them is very compelling. It’s interesting that the anti-bullying law was put on hold. You’d think that they would want that enforced right away. Great job!
Virginia VanLieshout • Nov 24, 2013 at 9:12 pm
I thought this article was very well written. Not only was the position very clear, the evidence provided backed it up perfectly. I really liked the sentence:”Schools are responsible for the security of their students and can not accomplish this without increased intervention, prevention and an established punishment for bullies.” I felt that this sentence was very well put together language wise. My only comment is that “seventy seven” (your third link) should have been 77.
Olivia Novotony • Nov 9, 2013 at 5:42 pm
I agree with your position on this subject. There were many facts and statistics in this article that made it convincing, but where did you find these statistics? I also like that you put the concession statement near the beginning of the article, it is a unique structure that lent itself to be a transition between the paragraphs. It made your argument stronger.
Zack Campbell • Nov 4, 2013 at 12:48 am
The article looks good, though there was one sentence I don’t think im understanding. “During one class period at Stillwater Area High School, seven students around the U.S. are bullied.” I think the wording on that is a bit odd. But other than that, good.