Girls gymnastics to debut new gym
As part of the new construction, the girls gymnastics has a new home. After sharing a gym with wrestling, gymnasts now have their own space to preform tricks and flips. This has generated much excitement among the girls. See the infographic above for more.
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Izzy Allen, Student Playlist Reporter
Izzy Allen is a junior and a student playlist reporter. She writes for the Student Life section for her traditional copy story. She writes for the Sport...
Aubrey Kelley • Nov 13, 2017 at 11:19 pm
This story did not catch my eye, it seemed to be lacking facts and important information to educate the reader on the addition of the new gymnastics gym. I would have liked to see something that made this story personal like quotes from current gymnasts or pictures of current gymnasts using the facility. Without the story involving a person, it lacked excitement or emotion. I think the pie chart was a nice addition and created some interest within the story.
Logan Huber • Nov 13, 2017 at 10:21 am
I like how you included the QRcode to the girls season this year and it helps to interact with the readers. I also agree with jesse about how it does seem to be pretty plain and it doesn’t show the whole gym which I also think would be important to see the whole new addition.
Andrew Phan • Nov 13, 2017 at 10:17 am
The topic of new addition to our school is a topic the public likes to learn about. The background seemed to be plain and not very appealing with it just being white. Would suggest adding a gymnastics vibe with photos of current gymnasts. The story did not have much to tell but it’s cool to see our sports team have their own training place.
Jesse Brown • Nov 11, 2017 at 4:28 pm
To me this story meets all of the basic qualities you need, but I think it lacks in a few areas also. The background and text was pretty basic and didn’t stand out to me. It seemed almost kind of plain. I like that photos were included, but it looks like the whole gym is not included which I would’ve liked to see. Also it seems to me that there is very little information of the new area, and that is a concern especially if I wanted to know more about it. I like the fact that the author included a pie chart, but overall the story just didn’t really grab my attention or stand out to me.