Bai drinks provide healthier beverage alternative
Alternative Copy Story by Mark O’Shea
Students in the high school have been coming to school with Bai drinks. Bai drinks are antioxidant infused drinks that do not have artificial flavors or sweeteners. Other beverages like sodas or sugary energy drinks include many ingredients and inorganic chemicals that may do more harm than good for your body, although they may claim to be healthy. Many students say they are very likely to purchase Bai drinks and enjoy them on a regular basis.
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Logan Huber • Jan 16, 2018 at 10:53 pm
This was well done and it looks very good with the bottle and the percentages inside the bottle. How does it stack up to other drinks and why has it become so popular?
Aubrey Kelley • Dec 18, 2017 at 7:35 am
The background of this caught my attention, the water rather than just a simple background was a small change that made a very big difference. The layout is very organized and balanced and the visual he created really portrayed the information well.
Jesse Brown • Nov 11, 2017 at 4:45 pm
This article really pulled me in and grabbed my attention. It is very well constructed and has a good flow to it. I really like the background and the way that the author represented the data with the drink showing the different percentages he calculated with his survey. I thought the author gave basic information about the drink and what it is, but I think it would have been nice to know how the Bai drinks stacked up against other drinks that students brought to school. Overall I thought that this alternative copy story was really interesting and successful.